2003-09-05 - 14:49
To be honest I think I have a lot of emotionel, personael stuff in the archives. Latley ( since about January i did stop that a bit, as I didn't want to share it too much, nothing to do with not having readers..I just didn't want to make it passwordet either.
and certain things are rather hurtfull so i prefer only share them with a few friends or online buddys ;-) thanks to them ;-)
Friday, Sept. 05, 2003
sani
Content/Entries: 20/40 points
What is this? A storage book? I didn�t even see any emotional, personal entries, or rather, hardly. You stored lots of pictures there which are all right, but why don't you add a little more story below them, relate all the things you felt about that specific adventure? Add emotions. You lack that. You merely put in some pictures, add a little label, and that's all. Readers will get bored with your diary especially those who happen to just stumple upon it. I know you probably don't want to gain lots of readers, but just do it for the sake of keeping a good diary. I'm not forcing you to do all these; the choice is always yours.
Appearance: 25/30 points
A Diaryland template! I'm sorry to say this, but that layout is already a dull-looking thing. It's boring, but, at least, you added some personal touches to it. I think it would be better if you center that image and put that 'search this site' thing on the bottom.
Updates: 7/10 points
Lots of misses. At any case, that only shows that you have life outside the internet.
Navigation: 7/10 points
It's ok.
Contact: 5/10 points
Guestbook, email. Why not add a link to your notes?
Total: 64
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